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破题:
1. 观察三条线之间的异同点【相同点:变化趋势,不同点:高低位置+变化幅度】2. 线图分组【组1: 游客总数的线 2.具体两种游客的线】
Depicted in the graph are the changing trends of the number of vacationers to a specific Caribbean island over a period of 2010 to 2017.
关注主题词汇替换vacationers
A substantial overall rise (1 million to 3.5 million) could be observed in the total number of visitors during the given period, despite the stagnation between 2015 and 2016. To break the growth of the total down to the two specific groups of visitors, one group grew from 0.7 million to 1.5 million, and the other from 0.3 million to 2 million.
第一句:该句传递了丰富的信息,即总数整体上升,尽管在个别年份上,其数值存在稍许停滞。
第二句:体现对比关系,阐明表示总数的线和表示具体两种游客的线之间的联系。
During the initial years, visitors were more likely to stay on the island than were they to stay on cruise ships. It is also notable that the gap narrowed gradually between these two types of visitors in the subsequent years until 2016, as the number of landed visitors stabilized at 1.5 million between 2013 and 2015 and started to slide, while that of cruising visitors presented a continuous boom. With the continuous boom subsequently, staying on cruise ships became people’s first choice, despite the growth in the number of landed visitors.
写作要点小结:
1. 关注句子主语的替换
2. 关注描述变化趋势的动词(及其变形)
3. 关注主题词汇(landed visitors/ cruising visitors)
4. 句型的使用(倒装句,包含形式主语的名词性从句,状语从句)
To sum up, the island had become increasingly popular, since increases were found in two types of visit.
结尾段落:关注状语从句的使用
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