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雅思小作文示范写作静态组合图:海平面升高影响对比

作者: 2026-08-10 16:10 来源:长沙编辑
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  The charts below show the land area lost (thousand km2) per one-meter rise in sea level and the population (in million) affected per one-meter rise in sea level in the predicted future。

 


  主体分段方法1:一图一段


  开头段


  The charts illustrate the predicted loss of land area and the number of people affected in six regions as a result of a one-metre rise in sea level.


  概述段


  Overall, Asia is by far the most severely affected region in both categories. However, the remaining five regions display considerable discrepancies in the relationship between land loss and demographic impacts.


  思路要点:
  - Asia水土流失面积、受影响人口都
  - 其他五个区域水土流失面积、受影响的人口规模之间关系呈现不同规律


  Body paragraph 1


  Regarding land loss, Asia is projected to lose 450 thousand km? of land, followed by America (160 thousand km2) and Europe (150 thousand km2). South Africa and Central Africa experience relatively smaller losses, at 120 and 80 thousand km? respectively. Oceania, in contrast, is estimated to experience the least land loss, at only 10 thousand km?.


  思路要点:柱图
  - Asia数据( 450 thousand km2),America排第二(160 thousand km2) ,Europe排第三(150 thousand km2)
  - Africa受影响程度中等,South Africa为120 thousand km2,Central Africa为80 thousand km2
  - Oceania损失面积最小(10 thousand km2)


  Body paragraph 2


  As for population impact, Asia emerges as the most vulnerable region again, where 250 million people will be affected. Despite relatively limited land loss, South Africa and Central Africa rank second and third in terms of demographic consequences, with 117 million and 95 million people affected respectively. America comes next with 73 million people affected, in contrast to its second-place position for land loss. Conversely, despite a moderate level of land loss, merely 10 million people in Europe are predicted to be affected. This figure is five times as large as that in Oceania, which remains the least affected region


  思路要点:饼图
  - Asia数据仍然(250 million)
  - 尽管损失的土地面积不是很多,但受影响的人口方面South Africa排第二(117 million),South Africa (95 million)
  - America有73 million的人会受影响,排名和它损失土地面积的排名接近
  - Europe土地损失面积中等,但受影响到的人只有10 million,是Oceania的5倍(Oceania受影响人数)


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