雅思小作文示范写作静态表:三个专业学生满意度

长沙编辑 2026-02-10 15:39

    This table below shows percentages of satisfaction that First-Year students rated their modules in five aspects in 2014.

 


    主体段分段方法:
    主体1:Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor
    主体2:Resource(print)、Resource(other)


    开头段


    The table illustrates the proportions of first-year students who were satisfied with three subjects (Economics, Law and Commerce) across five aspects in 2014.


    概述段


    Overall, Commerce achieved the highest satisfaction levels across all five categories. While students in Economics and Commerce were most satisfied with teaching quality, Law lagged behind in this area.


    思路要点:
    - Commerce三个方面的好评率最高
    - Economics、Commerce在teaching的好评率最高,但Law在teaching的好评率最低


    Body paragraph 1


    It is clear that the three modules differed significantly regarding teaching-related criteria. Commerce performed exceptionally well, with 95% of students expressing satisfaction with pre-course information, compared with just 59% for Economics. Likewise, 95% of the surveyed students were satisfied with teaching quality in Economics and Commerce, while Law recorded the lowest figure at just 62%. A similar pattern was observed for tutoring sessions, where Commerce and Economics scored above 90%, compared with a noticeably lower figure for Law (76%).


    思路要点:Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor
    - 这三个方面,三个学科的满意度比例差距较大
    - Pre-Course info:Commerce满意度最高(95%),但Economics仅为59%
    - Teaching:Economics、Commerce都为95%,Law仍然排最后一位(62%)
    - Tutor:Commerce、economics满意度都超过了90%,但law数据较低(72%)


    Body paragraph 2


    However, satisfaction with resources showed less significant variations, as the difference among the three subjects was under 20%. Commerce still took the lead, with over 80% giving positive feedback to both printed and other materials. Paper materials for economics were favored by 81% of the students, roughly 20% higher than the rate for other resources. Conversely, 70% of students expressed satisfaction with printed resources provided by the Department of Law, which was slightly lower than the 80% recorded for other resources.


    思路要点:Resource(print)、Resource(other)
    - 这两个方面,三个学科满意度差异不大,在20%以内
    - Commerce:满意度仍旧最高,两个resource的满意度都超过80%
    - Economics:resource(print)满意度为81%,比resource(other)高了约20%
    - Law:resource(print)满意度为70%,但resource(other)满意度为80%


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