雅思小作文示范写作:某国现场观看体育比赛人数比例

长沙编辑 2026-06-24 16:25

    The chart below shows the percentage of population who went to watch live sport events in one county.

 


    主体段分段方法:
    主体1:football、tennis、swimming、golf
    主体2:basketball、cycling


    开头段


    The bar chart compares the proportions of people who attended six different live sports events in a particular country in 2005, 2010 and 2015.


    概述段


    Overall, most sports experienced a rise in popularity, with the exception of cycling and golf. Among the six sports, football remained the most popular throughout the period, while swimming consistently attracted the fewest viewers.


    思路要点:
    - 除cycling、golf外,都上升
    - football观看人数始终最多,swimming观看人数始终


    Body paragraph 1


    The figures for football and tennis increased steadily, rising significantly from 4% to 10% and from 15% to 23% respectively. Although swimming remained the least popular sport over the given period, its figure tripled to 3% between 2005 and 2010, followed by a period of stability until 2015. In contrast, the golf attendance remained unchanged at 5% in 2005 and 2010, after which it fell slightly to 3% in 2015.
    思路要点:football、tennis、swimming、golf
    - football、tennis:持续上升,分别从4%上升到10%、从15%上升到23%
    - swimming:观众人数始终,2005-2010年期间上涨了3倍达到3%→随后到2015年保持平稳
    - golf:2005-2010年观看人数平稳在5%→随后到2015年小幅下降到3%


    Body paragraph 2


    Basketball and cycling, however, experienced notable fluctuations over the period. Starting at 5% in 2005, the attendance rate of basketball dropped to a low of 3% in 2010, before growing rapidly to 8% by 2015. Conversely, cycling saw a modest increase from 11% to 14% between 2005 and 2010, before dropping sharply to 9% in 2015.


    思路要点:basketball、cycling
    - basketball、cycling经历了显著波动
    - basketball:2005年观看人数为3%→最后2010年下降到点3%→2015年急剧上升到8%
    - cycling:2005年到2010年从11%上升到14%→2015年急剧下降到9%


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