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雅思小作文示范写作动态图:学生宿舍楼变化

作者: 2026-01-06 15:38 来源:长沙编辑
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    The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building.

 


    分段方法:一图一段
    Body 1:2010年
    Body 2:Now


    开头段


    The maps compare the layout of a student accommodation building as it was in 2010 and today.


    概述段


    Overall, this building has undergone significant changes, primarily involving the addition of more student bedrooms to accommodate a larger student population. Additionally, a large car park has been introduced, along with other new facilities.


    思路要点:
    - 新建更多student-bedroom以容纳更多学生
    - 新建一个car parking


    Body paragraph 1


    In 2010, students could enter this residence hall through the main entrance at the southwestern corner. Upon entry, they would walk down a hallway with a dormitory on the left, adjacent to a bathroom. On the right-hand side, a narrow garden stretched along the length of the hallway. Continuing straight ahead, students could reach another bedroom at the far end of the building. Turning left, a kitchen stood next to the dormitory, followed by a third bedroom in the northeastern corner of the hall. At the western end of the building, there was a smaller garden and a living room.


    思路要点:2010年
    - main entrance位于西南角
    - 进入之后是hallway,所有边是一个student-bedroom,和一个bathroom相邻
    - 右手边是一个长条状的garden
    - 正冲着hallway尽头是另一个student-bedroom,与一个kitchen相邻→隔壁是另一个student-bedroom,西边是一个小规模的garden和一个living room


    Body paragraph 2


    In contrast, several significant changes have been made to the current layout. While there have been no changes to the main entrance, the hallway has been shortened to create space for a newly built en-suite room, which is located to the left of the original dormitory in the southeastern corner. Similarly, the previous garden on the southern side has been replaced by a spacious car park. The two bedrooms on the eastern side of the building have remained unchanged, but the kitchen has been expanded to serve as both a cooking area and a communal social space for students. On the northern side, two additional student bedrooms have been added, replacing the former garden and living room.


    思路要点:Now
    - entrance没有变化,但hallway被缩短,在东南角的student-bedroom左边新建一个en-suite room
    - 南边的garden改建成一个car parking
    - 东边的两组student-bedroom没有变化,但kitchen增加了social interaction的功能
    - 北边的garden和living room被改建成另外两个student-bedroom

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